![A creation story I have written for my world. I would love feedback. (I'll add the plain text in comments if you are struggling to read it) : r/worldbuilding A creation story I have written for my world. I would love feedback. (I'll add the plain text in comments if you are struggling to read it) : r/worldbuilding](https://preview.redd.it/creation-story-for-my-homebrew-world-would-love-feedback-v0-2q96blxeiu9a1.png?auto=webp&s=42ea5229737effb4f7a96cb2e12477ad041257ac)
A creation story I have written for my world. I would love feedback. (I'll add the plain text in comments if you are struggling to read it) : r/worldbuilding
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The City of God and the Goal of Creation (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Alexander, T., Ortlund, Dane, Van Pelt, Miles: 9781433555749: Amazon.com: Books
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God And The Gas Pumps...........[religion; Creation; Short] - God And The Gas Pumps...........[religion; Creation; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards
![The New Creation and the Storyline of Scripture (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Thielman, Frank, Van Pelt, Miles V., Ortlund, Dane C.: 9781433559556: Amazon.com: Books The New Creation and the Storyline of Scripture (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Thielman, Frank, Van Pelt, Miles V., Ortlund, Dane C.: 9781433559556: Amazon.com: Books](https://m.media-amazon.com/images/I/71vPxXsmOBL._AC_UF1000,1000_QL80_.jpg)
The New Creation and the Storyline of Scripture (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Thielman, Frank, Van Pelt, Miles V., Ortlund, Dane C.: 9781433559556: Amazon.com: Books
![From Chaos to Cosmos: Creation to New Creation (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Greidanus, Sidney, Ortlund, Dane C., Van Pelt, Miles V.: 9781433554971: Amazon.com: Books From Chaos to Cosmos: Creation to New Creation (Short Studies in Biblical Theology): Greidanus, Sidney, Ortlund, Dane C., Van Pelt, Miles V.: 9781433554971: Amazon.com: Books](https://m.media-amazon.com/images/I/71vOtmCopnL._AC_UF1000,1000_QL80_.jpg)